翻译的我自己觉得恶心！

突发奇想找了新概念2中的一篇文章来翻译试试，哎！整得什么玩意，没救了！

中文： 人们不再像以前那样诚实了。偷窃的诱惑力比以往任何时候都更强烈 -- 特 别是在大的商店里。一名侦探最近注意上了一位穿着讲究的妇女，她总是在星期一上午进入一家大商场。有一个星期一，当这位妇女走进这家商场时，里面的人比往 常少，因此，侦探比较容易监视她。这位妇女先是买了几样小商品。过了一会儿，她又选了商场里最昂贵的一件衣服，把它递给了售货员。那售货员以最快的速度为 她包好了衣服。然后，那妇女拿过包就走出了商场，根本没有付钱。她被逮捕后。侦探发现原来那售货员是她的女儿。那姑娘每星期“送”她母亲一件免费的衣服！

我整的：

People are not as honest as they were. The temptation of steeling is much stronger than ever before - especially in some big shops. A detective recently found a lady with decent clothes, she always goes to a store in Monday morning. On one Monday, when this lady entered this store, there were less people there, so the detective could spy her easily. This lady bought several small products firstly, and after a while, she picked one of the most expensive cloths in the store and gave it to a seller. The seller packed the cloth as quick as she could, the lady just took it and walked out of the store, she did not pay anything. After she was arrested, the detective found that the seller was just her daughter. That girl sent her mother a free cloth every week.

原书的：

People are not so honest as they once were. The temptation to steal is greater than ever before---especially in large shops. A detective recently watched a well-dressed woman who always into a large store on Monday mornings. One Monday, there were fewer people in the shop than usual when the woman came in. So it was easier for the detective to watch her. The woman first bought a few small articles. After a little time, she chose one of the most expensive dresses in the shop and handed it to an assistant who wrapped it up for her as quickly as possible. Then the woman simply took the parcel and walked out of the shop without paying. When she was arrested, the detective found out that the shop assistant was her daughter. The girl ‘gave’ her mother a free dress once a week!

很多词不会用，动词，介词。 要命的是还不会复合句，出来的都是单句，哎！sick of myself!